Comments on: You mean she lied? Curse your sudden but inevitable betrayal! SFFS for 1-18

By: Peter Vialls

Peter Vialls — Sun, 19 Jan 2014 19:53:42 +0000

I like the line “hair wrapped tight – all business now”. My wife always says she can’t think straight when her hair is loose – obviously Catava is of the same view!

By: Sue Ann Bowling

Sue Ann Bowling — Sat, 18 Jan 2014 18:12:07 +0000

Or it’s a trap to make it look as if Estrella’s working against them.

By: S.A. Check

S.A. Check — Sat, 18 Jan 2014 17:29:12 +0000

It’s a trap! It’s these “in your face danger” situations that a character can really shine through. I expect to see a few acts of extreme courage coming up soon and who rises as a true leader for the group. “use it as the Khimeyr’s welcome mat.” – great line!