Comments on: Who’s that girl? Always a good question to ask — SFFS for Saturday 11-17

By: Peter Vialls

Peter Vialls — Sun, 18 Nov 2012 21:07:46 +0000

Grabbed me – a mystery, a grandmother who I suspect is all too manipulative for Astan’s good, and elves too. Nice snippet!

By: Cary Caffrey

Cary Caffrey — Sun, 18 Nov 2012 20:14:48 +0000

I wanna’ know too! Great snip.

PS – I coulda’ sworn I commented yesterday. Not sure what happened there.

By: Heidi Ruby Miller (@heidirubymiller)

Heidi Ruby Miller (@heidirubymiller) — Sun, 18 Nov 2012 13:18:43 +0000

What a hook, Lyndi! And way to get a feel for the characters in such a small scene.

:) Heidi

By: Ann Kopchik (@amergina)

Ann Kopchik (@amergina) — Sun, 18 Nov 2012 03:08:50 +0000

Nice snippet! Tricky Nana’s are the best.

By: Patrick Stutzman (@PatrickStutzman)

Patrick Stutzman (@PatrickStutzman) — Sat, 17 Nov 2012 22:38:18 +0000

Maybe she just wants him to try her coffee? No?

By: Sue Ann Bowling

Sue Ann Bowling — Sat, 17 Nov 2012 19:52:20 +0000

So what is grandma up to?

By: Jeffrey Hollar

Jeffrey Hollar — Sat, 17 Nov 2012 15:56:56 +0000

Elves AND a sneaky Nana with a hidden agenda? Got me hooked. I liked the flow of this and the foreshadowing of things to come.

By: J. M. Blackman

J. M. Blackman — Sat, 17 Nov 2012 15:38:52 +0000

I love that he reconsidered the source of frustration. Characters often stay wrapped up in their heads, rather than reconsider their situation. Nice to see a smart character!

By: T.K. Toppin

T.K. Toppin — Sat, 17 Nov 2012 14:41:08 +0000

Oh, sneaky little Nana. But now I want to learn more!

By: SFFS– this week an excerpt from THE ELF QUEEN « Lyndi Alexander and her worlds of fancy

Sat, 17 Nov 2012 03:40:51 +0000

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