Comments on: Don’t mess with a WoW-charactered, slobber-dripping Orc….SFFS for May 19

By: Lyndi

Lyndi — Mon, 21 May 2012 01:35:22 +0000

Haha…My name is Inigo Montoya…. haha. Indeed.

He should have perhaps snashed the door off the hinges…but Lane is a little new at this. Maybe next time…

By: J.M. Blackman

J.M. Blackman — Sun, 20 May 2012 23:31:39 +0000

He’s like huge green version of Inigo Montoya. :) I really love the details in this, especially when you used “two elf’s lengths.” That makes this world that much more believable. Great descriptions.

By: cpsingleton42

cpsingleton42 — Sun, 20 May 2012 21:46:20 +0000

He’s a bit whimpy; he couldn’t even smash the door off its hinges!! My gran would be better! lol
Sorry, great description and very original!! well done!

By: Heidi Ruby Miller (@heidirubymiller)

Heidi Ruby Miller (@heidirubymiller) — Sun, 20 May 2012 21:27:31 +0000

Entertaining as always, Lyndi! Can’t wait to jump into your books!!

By: S A Check

S A Check — Sun, 20 May 2012 03:35:43 +0000

Great Snippet! I love the detail about being two elves length away, very original. Orc vs. Elf – Let’s get ready to rumble!

By: Lyndi

Lyndi — Sun, 20 May 2012 02:12:16 +0000

He worked really hard to get Xiomar out into the real world–but he made a few fatal errors that will put the prince in danger after all…

By: Sue Ann Bowling

Sue Ann Bowling — Sun, 20 May 2012 01:04:56 +0000

Sounds like a typical computer glitch. Or is this what he was TRYING to get?

By: Liana Brooks

Liana Brooks — Sun, 20 May 2012 00:09:05 +0000

Orcs can talk? I thought they just died to give you XP. :-s

By: Cassandra Davis

Cassandra Davis — Sat, 19 May 2012 22:15:55 +0000

That’s a pretty articulate orc. Usually they just grunt. And drool. And bleed. Mostly bleed…

By: Cary Caffrey

Cary Caffrey — Sat, 19 May 2012 21:17:54 +0000

Wait… You say it stopped ‘two elves’ lengths in front of him’, but you didn’t say if those were wood-elves’ lengths or dark-elves’ lengths! That difference may prove fateful… :)

Lovely snippet!