A few words on world-building from Reader’s Choice award-winner CJ Lyons

By CJ Lyons

 People often associate world building with science fiction or fantasy.  But I’d like to talk about a different way to world build, one that works for any genre by focusing on specific word choices and details.   

 In order to draw the reader into your story you need to create a universe where you both control the rules and where you make a promise to the reader to also follow those rules.

 If the world you create is 1950′s cold war Berlin, you’d better not have your hero pull out a cell phone.  Seems obvious, but world building is much more than mere scenery.  Every choice your characters make from what clothes they wear to the car they drive helps to create this alternative universe for your readers. 

When a reader begins your book an implicit promise is made by you as the author: you will entertain without boring or insulting their intelligence

 This translates to the only two rules I follow when writing: Never Bore and Never Confuse.

 You start building your world with the very first sentence–which is why so many books begin with descriptions of setting or weather.  But there are other more dramatic ways to pull your reader into your world.

 I’m going to share with you my favorite first line of all the books I’ve read this year.  It’s from Evan McNamara’s FAIR GAME.

             Ever since we shot half of the Mineral County sheriff’s department, my deputy and I have been a little shorthanded.

 With that one line, McNamara creates an entire world that he invites the reader to enter.  And with a hook like that, what reader would refuse?

 How does McNamara do it?  He made sure his opening had three elements: it is visceral, evocative and telling.

 Visceral: as in revealing the pov character’s emotions. 

 Here we have a first person pov and we immediately see that he’s laconic, that he’s a man of action (shot half the department) and there’s no remorse here, is there?  Makes you wonder if maybe he’s gonna get his comeuppance for those past actions during the course of the story.

 Read that last sentence again–”Makes you wonder.”  You as in the reader. 

 McNamara creates immediate tension in the reader and involvement by the reader by making you care enough to wonder about something.  It’s what I like to call emotional velcro and is a great technique for any hook, whether it’s an opening line, a pitch to an agent or editor, back cover copy, or a query letter.

 This is the next element in world building: evocative.  Using your word choices to elicit emotion in your reader. 

 We already discussed how McNamara created curiosity, but what other emotions did you experience in reading this one sentence?  A feeling of kinship or empathy at a lawman forced to kill half his department?  A sense of bravado?  How about anticipation of what might happen next?

 And lastly, to successfully world build, you need telling details.  Every single detail you choose must do the work of creating your universe for the reader. 

 McNamara uses several telling details: half the department was shot (telling the reader that some survived), they were shot by “we” (telling the reader that it wasn’t only the pov character doing the shooting), where are we? Mineral County–telling us the book will take place in a small town, rural setting.  And who is the main character?  The sheriff who’s been overworked and shorthanded but still has at least one loyal deputy to help out.

 Wow!  Look at everything that one sentence achieved!

 Okay, most of us won’t be able to pack that much oomph in one sentence.  But remember, book buyers make their decision whether or not to read your book in less than 3 pages, so you need to get those telling, evocative and visceral details up front.

Should you stop there with the first page?  Heck no.  Once you make that promise to your audience, you need to keep delivering, building that world brick by brick.  And what are those bricks made of?  Details. The decisions your characters make. 

 In essence, that means that you’re not building your world alone.  By choosing the right visceral, evocative, and telling details to color your plot and character, you are inviting the reader to join you.

 Once your reader is invested in your story, you’ve got them hooked! 

 So, give these VET details a try with your own world building. And don’t forget, have fun with it!

CJ

About CJ:

As a pediatric ER doctor, CJ Lyons has lived the life she writes about in her cutting edge suspense novels.  She has assisted police and prosecutors with cases involving child abuse, rape, homicide and Munchausen by Proxy and has worked in numerous trauma centers, as a crisis counselor, victim advocate, as well as a flight physician for Life Flight. 

 CJ credits her patients and their families for teaching her the art of medicine and giving her the courage to pursue her dream of becoming a novelist.

 Her first novel, LIFELINES (Berkley, March 2008), received praise as a “breathtakingly fast-paced medical thriller” from Publishers Weekly, was reviewed favorably by the Baltimore Sun and Newsday, named a Top Pick by Romantic Times Book Review Magazine, and became a National Bestseller.  LIFELINES also won a Readers’ Choice Award for Best First Novel.

Her award-winning, critically acclaimed Angels of Mercy series (LIFELINES, WARNING SIGNS, URGENT CARE, and CRITICAL CONDITION) is available now.  Her newest project as co-author of a new suspense series with Erin Brockovich, starts with the release of ROCK BOTTOM in March, 2011.  To learn more about CJ and her work, go to www.cjlyons.net

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